"He's looking for something, and he's not going to rest until he finds it."
Of course he won't, not until he's found Rodney, that's what John does :)
You build up a very bleak picture of this world through your telling of Rodney's journey back to John. And I love the reveal at the end re the 'Shhh'ing' Even when he'd lost everything else, he was still holding on to John in the only way he could.
Excellent story, perfect use of the prompt. Thank you.
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Date: 2008-08-04 08:50 am (UTC)Of course he won't, not until he's found Rodney, that's what John does :)
You build up a very bleak picture of this world through your telling of Rodney's journey back to John. And I love the reveal at the end re the 'Shhh'ing' Even when he'd lost everything else, he was still holding on to John in the only way he could.
Excellent story, perfect use of the prompt. Thank you.