wickedwords: (lorne name by fatuorum)
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I wrote some comment!porn for [livejournal.com profile] casspeach the other day, and by comment!porn, I mean comment!UST.

Title: Pit Traps, not so much
Author: Rachael Sabotini
500 words, Lorne/Parrish




Pit Traps, not so much


Being tied up didn't bother Lorne too much -- as a member of the SGC, he'd kinda gotten used to it -- but Parrish was a scientist, and he wasn't used to being assaulted by bird worshipers while attempting to get samples of a new type of fern, then being tied up and imprisoned in a mud hut. Ferns, Parrish knew. Pit traps, not so much.

But apparently, Parrish did know a thing or two about ropes. Even in the dim moonlight that made it in through the window slots of their prison, Lorne could see him concentrating and evaluating the information at hand.

"I'd say a Sisal derivative," Parrish said, twisting his wrists slightly. "Those don't have a lot of give to them, and have an excellent knot-holding capability."

"Ya don't say," Lorne grunted, trying to scoot around so he could get his hands close to Parrish's. He figured if he got close enough, maybe he could untie Parish somehow.

Or Parrish could untie him. He was easy like that.

"Hhm, yes." Parrish stretched his neck out, closing his eyes as he felt at the ropes, like a wine connoisseur at a blind taste test. "Twisted, though, not braided." His eyes sprang open. "That means it will be easy to unravel, if we can just--" He hissed as Lorne's fingers brushed his. "Ah, yes. Get in close, where-- Like that."

Lorne worked at the knots, at first digging at the scratchy fiber with his fingernails until he accidentally scratched the soft skin on the inside of Parrish's wrist. This time, when Parrish hissed, it was more like a moan.

It sounded kinda vaguely dirty.

"You okay?" Lorne asked quietly.

"Fine. Yes." He could hear Parrish swallow. "Just a little...more gentle, if possible, Major. My hands are delicate."

Now that he thought about it, Lorne knew what Parrish meant. His fingers were long and tapered, yet strong. Lorne moved a little slower as he continued to work at the rope, being as gentle as he could with Parrish's hands.

Parrish was pressed against his back, and Lorne could hear him breathing, deep, hard, heavy breaths whenever he jerked too hard at the rope. The real fuck of the matter was that this was turning him on. Every whisper, every sigh went straight to Lorne's cock -- but he really couldn't think about that right now. He thought of escape, and freedom, and not what Parrish might look like with those fucking long-fingered hands wrapped around Lorne's cock some night.

The rope gave way, and Lorne let out a sigh of relief. Parrish was able to get enough slack and fold up his hand in such a way that he could slip free.

"Thank you," Parrish whispered as he untied Lorne. His lips brushed Lorne's ear as he spoke, and Lorne couldn't help but arch into it, his cock aching. Once they got back to Atlantis, he had a few questions to ask Parrish.

Like where the hell had he learned so much about rope.

Date: 2005-11-02 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalikahuntress.livejournal.com
Guh *fans myself* that was so hot and I was so sad to see it end so soon *g*. I'd love to see how Parrish knows so much about being tied up myself:)

Date: 2005-11-02 09:17 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (purplescape by destina)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Well, you know, those botanists. They spend a lot of time tying plants up to stakes.

Or so Parrish claims...

Date: 2005-11-02 04:27 pm (UTC)
ext_2331: (shep stand by your man)
From: [identity profile] kageygirl.livejournal.com
*giggles* Y'know, if y'all keep writing things like this, Lorne/Parrish is rapidly going to become my favorite polarbear!pairing.

Like where the hell had he learned so much about rope.

Hey, all botanists are slutty. That's why they play with all that cross-pollination. *g*

Date: 2005-11-02 09:19 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john eyes by monanotlisa)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
::nods:: Bontanist are all about the hybridization, aren't they? And the grafting, getting things that don't normally go together to just...fit.

Date: 2005-11-02 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com
Like where the hell had he learned so much about rope.

That's a very good question, and one that should definitely be asked. /g/

Date: 2005-11-02 09:20 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney girlsexy by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Parrish insists that he spends a lot of time tying plants to things hydroponics, but I doubt that Lorne buys that particular explaination myself. Thanks!

Date: 2005-11-02 06:15 pm (UTC)
zoerayne: (sga)
From: [personal profile] zoerayne
I still love this. And I love that you picked my favorite line for the title. *g*

So much guh in so few words!

Date: 2005-11-02 09:22 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (ronon blue by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, man. I needed a title so bad. Thank you for saying you liked the line. It was a total lifesaver. And yay! I'm glad you like it.

Date: 2005-11-02 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
Fantastic title, and very nice scene. Liked the scientific approach to escape and how Lorne was supersensitive to the quiet sounds. Yum.

Date: 2005-11-03 12:39 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage determined by icon_ascentio)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Over and over again, my characters seem to get into situations that seem to require bondage. I ask you -- what is up with that? Thanks!

Date: 2005-11-03 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
LOL -- whatever it is, I definitely approve. ;)

Date: 2005-11-02 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taelonmahal.livejournal.com
Hmmmmmmm. That was niiiice.

Date: 2005-11-03 12:37 am (UTC)

Date: 2005-11-02 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribewraith.livejournal.com
Lovely, wonderful, gah
can i have some more please?

Date: 2005-11-03 12:41 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney woobiedreams by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! Oh, thank you. Glad you'd like to see more.

Date: 2005-11-02 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Yes, yes, yes! There needs to be more Parrish/Lorne stories around here and this was hot and understated and just really, really needs a sequel!

Date: 2005-11-03 12:55 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john maths by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Man, sequels. I don't know. Can't I just say 'and they had hot monkey sex' instead?

Date: 2005-11-03 12:55 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (McKay 1)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Wow, this is a lot of hot packed into a few words. I am finding I am liking this pairing very much.

Date: 2005-11-03 02:47 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney genius at work by starbuck92)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I think I agree with Kagey that it's a WTFpolarbear?!!pairing, but that's what makes it fun. Thanks!

Date: 2005-11-03 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miera-c.livejournal.com
yay! Lorne!

(sorry that's all I got right now)

Date: 2005-11-03 02:48 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john pretty in purple by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yay! is good. I like Yay!. Thanks.

Date: 2005-11-03 01:37 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Rache. For not the first time, you've sent me to my happy place. Satisfied? *GGG*

Re: woopsie

Date: 2005-11-03 02:49 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage sex by copracat)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! {{hugs}} I'm so glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-11-03 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
Lorne/Parrish rope porn. Very excellent.

Date: 2005-11-03 03:22 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney girlsexy by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! Thank you.

mmmmmm ropes

Date: 2005-11-03 04:02 pm (UTC)
copracat: dreamwidth vera (big gun - maj. lorne)
From: [personal profile] copracat
I could get used to Lorne/Parrish under the influence of this kind of story.

Re: mmmmmm ropes

Date: 2005-11-04 12:25 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (pegasus coffee by twisted_vergule)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
It may be completely cracked, but they are so much fun. They had great chemistry together. Thanks!

Date: 2005-11-03 09:15 pm (UTC)
ext_953: Gabriel casually leaning against a wall (Radek)
From: [identity profile] toniabarone.livejournal.com
Parrish! *glomps* Fast becoming one of my fav characters! Any chance for a sequel/continuation? Pretty please?

Date: 2005-11-04 12:31 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney girlsexy by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
You mean where they get back to Atlantis and Lorne escorts Parrish out of the informary because he's all loopy from the site of the blood sample that beckett took? And where Lorne tries not to think about how nice Parrish's arm feels when Parrish graps him to keep upright? And how when they get to Parrish's room, Lorne can't quite make himself leave and where he notices that all the plants are tied up in new and interesting ways, like someone has been practicing knot-tying on them? And he gets all hot and bothered watching Parrish trim some dead leaves off of the plant, so they have hot monkey sex on the floor of Parrish's jungle-like room? That kind of sequel?

No, I'm afraid I have no plans for anything like that.

Date: 2005-11-04 03:18 am (UTC)
ext_953: Gabriel casually leaning against a wall (Radek)
From: [identity profile] toniabarone.livejournal.com
*whimpers* Cruel, cruel woman, you.

Of course now I'm in love with the idea of Parrish's room bein' jungle-like. Which totally makes sense cause with the tiny bit of him we saw (what, like two minutes of him? And all of a sudden he's a fan favorite! Oi!) that seems like SUCH a thing he'd do.

*pouts* Now I feel the need to hunt up Parrish!fic. Evil person you. *pouts at you some more, in case the point didn't get across*

Date: 2005-11-04 05:08 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (Default)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yes'm. He's just in that teeny-tiny little prologue in Runner, but we love him so. *g*

Date: 2005-11-04 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-key.livejournal.com
So hot for the subtlety of it. Thank you.

Date: 2005-11-04 05:07 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney pineapple  by kathryn_arwen)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it. *g*

Date: 2005-11-04 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] palebluebell.livejournal.com
*Very* nice. Understated; in character and totally hot - thank you.

Date: 2005-11-04 09:03 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john maths by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Cool. I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2005-11-08 10:10 pm (UTC)
amalthia: (Default)
From: [personal profile] amalthia
I really enjoyed this story. :) thanks so much for sharing. Lorne/Parrish...I'm really beginning to like this pairing. :)

Date: 2005-11-10 03:00 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (hurt comfort i-man by thefakeheadline)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
They are a lot of fun. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2005-12-02 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cranberryink.livejournal.com
This was so great! Ahahaha, those scientists and their hidden depths. The world needs more Lorne/Parrish, yo.

Date: 2005-12-09 03:33 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (elizabeth smirk by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I just got this because of the comment problem in LJ, and I'm really happy that you liked the story. I completely agree that the world needs more Lorne/Parrish. Yay!

Date: 2005-12-20 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] out-there.livejournal.com
Parrish was pressed against his back, and Lorne could hear him breathing, deep, hard, heavy breaths whenever he jerked too hard at the rope.

Mmmmmmm!

Date: 2005-12-21 05:55 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (lorne purple by z_rayne)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Heee! That's as close to kink as I've come lately, and I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

posting

Date: 2006-02-26 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jawbreak06.livejournal.com
think you could let me post this fic at

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/parrish_lorneslash/

Re: posting

Date: 2006-02-28 08:00 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (lorne plant by fatuorum)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Sure! Go ahead and re-post it, with the link to this journal, in case someone wants to make comments. Thanks!

Date: 2009-12-12 09:58 pm (UTC)
greenapple: john sheppard (sga)
From: [personal profile] greenapple (from livejournal.com)
mm.. this is nice. i like.

Date: 2010-01-07 03:29 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (Default)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, cool! I wrote this one quite a while ago and I'm glad you like it!

re: Pit Traps

Date: 2011-10-03 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gsyh.livejournal.com
J-Yo's hands are like, the epitome of hand porn.

I like how you made him sound geeky about ropes.

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