wickedwords: (john plus rodney by newkidfan)
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Title: Sand and Sea
Author: Rachael Sabotini
Summary: Rodney usually slept in while John checked the crab traps in the morning.
800 words, Sheppard/McKay

Well, see, this started as a cheer-up comment sort of story thing for [livejournal.com profile] _inbetween_, but then I remembered a doodle that [livejournal.com profile] spaggel had done, so beaches got involved, and, uh, yeah. Anyway, many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] elynross for both the title and for her beta work, plus to [livejournal.com profile] z_rayne for her beta as well. I make no money from this, I mean no harm. All mistakes are my own.


Sand and Sea



Rodney usually slept in while John checked the crab traps in the morning, but today, he'd taken his tea out onto the deck and watched as John took the skiff out onto the water. The black-winged seagulls had circled around him, crying out as Rodney watched John paddle out to the buoy and haul the crab pot in. His whoop of joy echoed over the water, and Rodney could see his fist pump the air; John triumphantly held up the cage with three-clawed blue giants inside, then set the thing down before the skiff could tip over.

Huh. Who knew John had a talent for this. Rodney waved at him as John headed back to the beach. Looked like John would be the one cooking tonight.

In fact, John spent the rest of the morning digging a pit and building a fire, while Rodney puttered around the house, checking in with Pederson back at Atlantis. Rodney didn't have much to do at the moment, so after his shower, he headed down to the beach to watch John work. He brought along some sandwiches as John was still too skinny, and he ate his share as he perched on one of the logs near John, watching as he added some clams and native bivalves to the pit, then covered it all with wet planier fronds. In his Athosian shorts, which came almost to his knees, he looked like a kid making a sandcastle with a really huge moat.

"That's it," John said, dusting his hands off on his thighs. "Now we just have to wait for it to cook. Shouldn't be more than a few hours." He spread out the blanket Rodney had brought, easing his way down onto it, and spreading out in the sun-warmed sand.

Rodney watched as John's breathing evened out, then glanced out at the waves and the gulls riding the wind above them, before looking back again at John. Salt and pepper hair, skin weathered by the suns of a hundred different planets -- John still made Rodney's heart race, despite the changes that time had crafted in them. John had a lot more scars than he'd started with: the old one on his neck from the Iratus bug had been only the first of a new collection. He had a scar from a bullet on his shoulder, a couple on his back from a knife, claw marks on his ass and thighs from a gracite, and scars on his wrists from the chains the Genii had used. The scar on his arm from where the Wraith-girl grabbed him had never completely faded, and Rodney still yelled at John for scratching it.

He also held John at night when John shook, thinking the scar was turning blue.

Picking up one of the pebbles by his feet, Rodney tossed it toward the ocean. The scars were their history together, and he had traced each of them with fingers and tongue; he knew them better than the power schematics of Atlantis. Oh, he had his own scars, and like John's, not all of them were visible. They were both aging, and a few months ago, the SGC had offered John a civilian contractor position and a chance to go back to Earth. Elizabeth had counter-offered a pre-fab cabin near the Athosian settlement, one with a great view of the ocean, and a chance to stay on in an advisory position. For the both of them.

So while they couldn't see Atlantis from where they lived, there was never a second's doubt about her offer. There was nothing left on Earth for either of them.

Smoke from John's fire wafted past him and Rodney's mouth watered. "That smells great," he said quietly. If John was asleep, Rodney didn't want to disturb him.

But John wasn't asleep. Instead, he turned his head slightly to grin at Rodney, the mischievous grin that meant that Rodney was going to be in serious trouble later that night. "Yeah, it does, doesn't it?" He settled back down, hands folded across his chest, and closed his eyes. "Just remember, since I cooked, you get to do the dishes."

"How about we eat with our hands?"

"Uhmm. I'm good with that. Butter sauce will be involved."

"You and your nefarious plans." Standing up from his perch, Rodney dusted himself off before strolling over to John. "Scoot over," he murmured, and John did, not even opening his eyes while he made room.

Rodney sank onto the blanket, pressing his back against John's chest, and threaded his fingers though John's. Then he closed his eyes and listened a moment to the sound of John's breathing and the sound of the sea.
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Date: 2005-10-02 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basingstoke.livejournal.com
I am now speaking to you from the puddle on the floor that I have become.

*burble*

Message ends.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:20 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (tempt not by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! Thanks. Sometimes things get porny, and sometimes things get sweet, and sometimes there is a beach.

Date: 2005-10-02 03:28 am (UTC)
lapillus: (sunset clouds)
From: [personal profile] lapillus
Lovely and tranquil :)

Date: 2005-10-02 04:21 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage determined by icon_ascentio)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it. Yay!

Date: 2005-10-02 03:30 am (UTC)
reginagiraffe: Stick figure of me with long wavy hair and giraffe on shirt. (Default)
From: [personal profile] reginagiraffe
Very nice! I really like later-in-life stories and this is a good 'un.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:22 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (pegasus coffee by twisted_vergule)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I was wanting a story where the two stayed together for quite awile, and ended up having to write my own. Thanks.

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Date: 2005-10-02 03:38 am (UTC)
ext_1844: (physics n flyboys)
From: [identity profile] lapislaz.livejournal.com
(sigh) It eases the heart. And tickles, just a bit. Feels good.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:24 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney flag by ForCryinOutLoud)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, cool. I feel a little shy about writing tiny moments like this, but I figure, if I want them at times, maybe others do too. Thanks.

Date: 2005-10-02 03:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minnow1212.livejournal.com
Lovely and peaceful and so much history. Thank you.

>skin weathered by the suns of a hundred different planets<

Mmmm, like this line a lot.

(>there was never a second's doubt her offer<

Psst. Are you missing a word or two there?)

Date: 2005-10-02 03:47 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john maths by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Eeek! Yes I am, and thank you. I'm glad you liked the story too. *g*

Date: 2005-10-02 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elynross.livejournal.com
Oh, the opening is just lovely now! So nice.

Small note:

there was never a second's doubt her offer.

Maybe "there was never a second's doubt about her offer."

Date: 2005-10-02 03:49 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney ohcrap by peacerose)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, good. I'm glad that worked for you now. I also fixed the typo, so the about is in there are as well. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepouncer.livejournal.com
Mmmmmm. Butter and beaches - could anything be better?

Date: 2005-10-02 04:39 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage sex by copracat)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Today, we've had a really good storm with thunder and lightning and pounding rain. So at the moment? Beaches, sun and butter sound really, really good. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalikahuntress.livejournal.com
This was lovely and Im glad to see the boys getting the rest they so richly deserve:)

Date: 2005-10-02 04:51 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney bleeder by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Poor boys. They do need a break from all that whumping on occasion. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
Salt and pepper hair, skin weathered by the suns of a hundred different planets -- John still made Rodney's heart race, despite the changes that time had crafted in them.

Great image of John, especially since before this point he could have been younger but this just clues you right in. I'm all happy that he still excites Rodney.

and Rodney still yelled at John for scratching it.

Love the scars, the history in them, and of course that Rodney is there to 'remind' John to be good and to hold him when things are bad.

Then he closed his eyes and listened a moment to the sound of John's breathing and the sound of the sea.

*happy sigh*

Date: 2005-10-02 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john pretty man by thegrrrl)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you. I like the idea of John and Rodney growing old together, and still being in love and passionate about each other. I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-10-02 03:57 am (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (pretty shep)
From: [personal profile] sage
Oh, delightful. I love the gentle tone and all the little details of their life together here. Yay placid semi-retirement! Especially since that sort of implies that they defeated the Wraith, and victory is always cool. *g*

Date: 2005-10-02 02:18 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bruiser by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yes, in this world, the wraith are gone and the universe had been saved, and the boys are still together. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com
Aww, and hee! Beach picture!

I loved the last two lines. *happy sigh*

Date: 2005-10-02 02:19 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney AMTDI by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yes! The beach picture put many wicked thoughts in my head. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com
You captured the perfect retirement!:)

Date: 2005-10-02 02:20 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney puddlejumper by fifmeister)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Get rid of those pesky wraith and they could have quite the retirement community there. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raisintorte.livejournal.com
Wonderful!! This was just the perfect future for John and Rodney. :-)

Date: 2005-10-02 02:40 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john woobie by kaesaria)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
At the moment, I'd like to think so too. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 04:16 am (UTC)
fenris_wolf0: So innocent it hurts! (Default)
From: [personal profile] fenris_wolf0
Oh such a nice future to think about... Thank you for sharing!

Date: 2005-10-02 02:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney genius at work by starbuck92)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Occasionally, over the long haul, I like them to be safe, together and happy. It makes for a nice change of pace. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 04:30 am (UTC)
g_shadowslayer: (Default)
From: [personal profile] g_shadowslayer
This was sweet! I likey!

Date: 2005-10-02 02:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney pineapple  by kathryn_arwen)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
It's sweet as pineapple. *g* I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com
I'm an absolute sucker for stories where they end up living together, contentedly, if not happily. Absolutely lovely depiction of them, hon.

Date: 2005-10-02 02:59 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney strip by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
awww. Thanks, hon. It's kinda my version of comfort fic. *g*

Date: 2005-10-02 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ship-recs.livejournal.com
This is wonderful. It's so sweet that they're still together after all these years.

Date: 2005-10-02 03:24 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney woobiedreams by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I like the idea that no matter what happens and how screwed up they get, that eventually, they work it out and stick together. Thanks.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lerah99.livejournal.com
Ok, I'm not ashamed to admit that I am a total fluff whore. When it comes right down to it, I want my boys together and happy. Thank you so much for posting this! It is perfect.

Date: 2005-10-02 03:40 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (tempt not by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Sometimes it's good to have fluff. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namastenancy.livejournal.com
This is simply beautiful - sweet but not sappy. I liked that you remind us of what their struggles have cost them, the scars that they both bear - but that each provides comfort (and sex and love and FOOD PORN) for each other. OK - sorry got a bit carried away there.

Now, off to sniffle quietly.

Date: 2005-10-02 03:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage determined by icon_ascentio)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! ::hands over face:: I am the queen of food porn in this fandom. Very few stories don't have a reference to them eating in it. Thanks.

Date: 2005-10-02 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hopeowl.livejournal.com
Awwww! That was fantastic!

Date: 2005-10-02 03:43 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-10-02 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meinnim.livejournal.com
I love the quiet and restful mood in this fic.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:50 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bruiser by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Thank you! I figure that the boys needed some down time, and a clam bake seemed like a good idea.

Date: 2005-10-02 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com
That's how the series should end. Totally.

Date: 2005-10-02 04:51 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage sex by copracat)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mamoru22.livejournal.com
Wow, this is the kind of story I didn't even know I wanted o read until I did.

And did I mention I love it?

Much love! *g*

Date: 2005-10-02 05:04 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john plus rodney by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, cool! Yeah, some days, a story just feels right. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!

Date: 2005-10-02 11:11 am (UTC)

Date: 2005-10-02 05:05 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-10-02 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] randommagic.livejournal.com
Aw, this is lovely. I love that they are still near Atlantis, and still together after all these years. :)

Date: 2005-10-02 05:10 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney AMTDI by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I just can't see Rodney really being happy with going back to earth, not as long as Atlantis was still around. And John would be happy anyplace that Rodney wanted to be. *g* Thanks!
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