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Title: Breaking the Bank
Author: Rachael Sabotini ([livejournal.com profile] wickedwords)
Fandom: SGA (AU)
Summary: College student John needs cash, and Professor Rodney's got big plans about Vegas.
Many thanks to both [livejournal.com profile] z_rayne and [livejournal.com profile] elynross for their betas. This story is part of [livejournal.com profile] slodwick's "One Picture is Worth 1000 Words" challenge at [livejournal.com profile] picfor1000. Exactly 1000 words, not counting title or section breaks.

ETA:[livejournal.com profile] berlinghoff79 made a wonderful cover for the story, so the original inspiration image is now at the bottom of the post.





Breaking the Bank


John's housemates were complete pigs. This morning, he'd crawled past decaying pizza boxes, scattered beer bottles, and bowls of rotting cereal just to get to the front door -- stepping into a pool of liquefied Jell-o mere inches from his goal.

The rent was cheap, though, and John didn't have a lot of money to spare after books and tuition. But at this point, he wasn't sure that 'cheap' was really a bargain.

In and among the house-to-share notices on the student union bulletin board, a yellow leaflet proclaimed "Atlantis Investments -- Play Blackjack Over Spring Break" in bold lettering.

John stared at the poster a minute -- he was good at cards, and more money meant a better apartment -- so he took out his notebook and wrote down the contact information.

***

Dr. Rodney McKay, professor of Physics, presented the seminar, which was really a recruitment meeting for his own blackjack team. No older than John, with sandy-brown hair, clear blue eyes, and a certain-death glare when anyone asked a stupid question, his enthusiasm was contagious, and it wasn't long before John was fantasizing about him along with breaking a casino's bank.

But John had read up on card counting, and he just didn't see how it could be done. "So, Dr. McKay? Will we be learning high-low and basic strategy, or will we be using some other system?"

McKay's eyes flashed, and John shifted slightly in his chair, both entranced and reluctant to have all that attention focused on him. "You'll be learning every strategy you've ever heard of, but my theories go far beyond that--" McKay said enthusiastically, gesturing wildly to include the rest of the group.

By the time the seminar was over, John was more than half in love with Rodney McKay.

***

John spent weeks with McKay's team, learning to count cards but failing the check-out -- an ugly process with smoke and people shouting and buzzers ringing and lights flashing, in an attempt to simulate the worst possible environment in a Las Vegas casino. Lorne poured an ice bucket over John's head when he finally got the count right, while the rest of the group yelled and high-five'd around him.

Rodney folded his arms across his chest with a big wide grin, his eyes glittering like John had just defended his dissertation. "How'd you like to come to Atlantic City next weekend?"

"Depends. Do I get to room with you?"

Rodney laughed.

***

Even though he lost in Atlantic City, John proved he knew the system well enough to land a berth on the Vegas trip that spring. In Atlantic City, Rodney hadn't actually played, just watched nervously from the banks of nickel slots while John worked the table. But when they hit Vegas together, they found no one else at the rendezvous point, so the plan had to change.

"Come on," John said, wrapping his arm around Rodney's waist and pulling him toward the Mirage. "You'll be my boyfriend, and you can just...sit at the table and let me know when things warm up."

"Boyfriend...?" Rodney said nervously, then snapped his fingers. "Signals. Okay. Here's what we do. We pick a table, you bet a few big bets, then go to the bathroom or something while I, uh, bet a small amount and track the count. When it's good, I'll prop my chin on my right hand, and you can get back in the game."

"Now you're talking," John said, rubbing his hand along Rodney's back, feeling the sweat there. He leaned in and pressed his lips to Rodney's ear, feeling the shiver that ran through Rodney's body. "I'll bet the big money when you tell me it's right."

***

John came out of the men's room, smoothing his silk shirt into place, and saw Rodney signal him by placing both hands under his chin; he slid onto the stool and smiled at Rodney. "Thanks for keeping my place warm."

Rodney stayed for a while, but once John anted a thousand on the table, he had to leave. When the table finally turned cold, they met back of the Casino near the elevators. Rodney had a stupid souvenir fishing hat crushed in his hands, and sweat beaded along his brow while John sank against one of the mirrored walls, legs shaky with relief

"Well?" Rodney demanded. "How'd you do? Did anyone spot you? What was the final take?"

John grinned lazily. "We're up thirty thousand. And," he said, holding a key up for Rodney to look at, "they comped us a room."

"Are you serious?" Rodney's voice squeaked just a bit as he took the key from John and stared at it.

"Very. And two steak dinners, too." He tucked his arm around Rodney, and let his fingers sweep against Rodney's side. "Unless you have another room, you should think about spending the night."

***

Their suite overlooked the pool area and came complete with Jacuzzi, king-sized bed, and fully stocked bar. After showering, John poured them both drinks while Rodney counted the money and chips John had pulled from his pockets, his eyes glazing over.

John took a sip of his scotch, loving the way Rodney looked right now, totally high and completely bowled over. He set Rodney's drink down and let his fingers brush over Rodney's.

"God, John." Rodney licked his lips.

Leaning over, John brushed his lips against Rodney's. Rodney groaned and pushed fingers into John's hair, pulling John's head down for a better angle. Rodney opened his mouth wide and delved into John's mouth, hot whimpering noises occasionally escaping as John abandoned his drink to press his hand hard against Rodney's T-shirt, rucking it up and brushing his fingers over Rodney's bare stomach. "So we get to have sex now, right?"

"Oh, yeah." Rodney moaned, nipping at John's neck.

Free steak was free steak, so they answered when room service knocked, but they spent the rest of the weekend in bed. After all, when the cards were right, you had to play it out.

Original image inspiration:
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Date: 2006-01-17 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] claire.livejournal.com
MMMMmmmm. I love Professor Rodney.

Date: 2006-01-17 09:47 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney opinions by 'chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Professor Rodney is quite hot, isn't he? *g* Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com
That was an awesome eppy of Numb3rs. I would love to see the two of them do this in Vegas. LOVE!

Date: 2006-01-17 09:51 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john maths by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! I didn't even know that they showed a college student card-counting ep on Numb3rs until it was mentioned here; I had to go look it up on an episode guide. I think our inspiration stemmed from the same thing, the MIT Blackjack team, which had like 3 or 4 variations on it -- with both a book and some TV specials/news documentaries coming out about them. Now I really need to go download the ep and see what they did with it. Too cool!

And yes! I so want an Atlantis Caper-type episode now. It would be great, with John as the face man and Rodney the brains, and Teyla and Ronon the muscle. So much fun. *g*

Thanks!

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Date: 2006-01-17 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roguewords.livejournal.com
Ok, Slod knew what you'd write. (not that we blame her for giving you that pic)

Also, I love it when John's the student.

Great job.

Date: 2006-01-17 09:53 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john plus rodney by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yeah, it's kind of a given. Hand me a picture that says 'Physics' on it, and my heart belongs to Rodney. Plus, as you say, John the college student is so much fun. Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sori1773.livejournal.com
Eeee! Cards and sex! And John in silk! *bg* Yay!

Date: 2006-01-17 09:54 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john pretty man by thegrrrl)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I can just see him playing the high roller, in silk and a tailored suit and...and...and.

Yeah. *g*

Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 04:48 pm (UTC)
ext_1843: (johnsga)
From: [identity profile] cereta.livejournal.com
Free steak was free steak, so they answered when room service knocked,

Of course they did ;).

Very cute!

Date: 2006-01-17 09:55 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney AMTDI by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
They do have their priorities, don't they? Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com
Oh, fun!

I'd seduce a young Professor McKay, too. /g/

Date: 2006-01-17 09:56 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney strip by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yowsa, young Professor McKay is just smokin' hot, isn't he? *g* Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mamoru22.livejournal.com
Just finished watching the last numb3rs ep when I saw this. So this was working perfectly for me *g*

And yes, John having a crush on Rodney *always* works for me. :)

Date: 2006-01-18 12:07 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john eyes by monanotlisa)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
I love caper flims, and with John being so good at general math, it seemed like he'd make a great card counter. And Rodney, of course, has a plan...

(And no, Not thinking about the pet shop boys song "Oppertunities", oh, no. Not at all.)

Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvyola.livejournal.com
I have such a weakness for college-setting AUs for these two -- you just know that there's no way they could keep their hands off of each other!

John shifted slightly in his chair, both entranced and reluctant to have all that attention focused on him

Yep, that's exactly the push me-pull you effect that Rodney has.

Date: 2006-01-18 01:18 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney pineapple  by kathryn_arwen)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Man, me too. Young!John and young!Rodney are just really hot to think about. Glad I'm not the only one. Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] margueritem.livejournal.com
Hmmmm, good stuff. :)

Date: 2006-01-18 01:21 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-01-17 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joran.livejournal.com
Fabulous. :) Love those boys in any form.

Date: 2006-01-18 01:24 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney puddlejumper by fifmeister)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
They are my happy fun boys of the moment. ;) Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 10:05 pm (UTC)
ext_1771: Joe Flanigan looking A-Dorable. (genius rodney - sga)
From: [identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com
Guh. So short, yet so good.

(Ahem, hi. I'll read everything you write, by the way. The excellence of all your stories I've read so far has conditioned me.)

Date: 2006-01-18 05:04 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (hugs by sabine101)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Thank you. I consider myself to be just kinda mid-list in this fandom, so it's neat to hear that your interested in my stuff. Whee!

Date: 2006-01-17 10:41 pm (UTC)
ext_1175: (M/S by 2am_optimism)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
This is a whole lot of fun. :)

Date: 2006-01-18 05:05 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney girlsexy by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
The boys are so much fun, just by themselves. But even better together. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com
This is cool. I like how John was all turned on by Rodney's intensity. I love card counting and casino capers, and John and Rodney would be so good at it until Rodney yelled at someone for being stupid and they got kicked out. *g*.

Date: 2006-01-18 05:38 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney look by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
LOL! Oh, yeah. They couldn't be stealthy for long and stay undercover with Rodney around. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twisted-vergule.livejournal.com
That was shiny and fun--just like our boys. :)

Date: 2006-01-18 05:38 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (pegasus coffee by twisted_vergule)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, man. I love your icon. The boys are such good fun. Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-17 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sylvertongue.livejournal.com
Oh, this was fun.

I really, really want to see this as an episode on some Gambling Planet.

Date: 2006-01-18 03:11 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john plus rodney by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Man, me too. I think it could be a heck of a lot of fun. I can so see the whole team doing that Ocean's 11 thing.

Date: 2006-01-18 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] out-there.livejournal.com
Oh, that was great. I was totally grinning as I read it. Professor McKay. Card-Shark Sheppard. Free Steak!

Date: 2006-01-18 03:12 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john eyes by monanotlisa)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
And really, it's the free steak that's the most important. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-18 02:20 am (UTC)
zellieh: kitten looking shocked, openmouthed, text: WTF? (What the fuck?) (Young Rodney icon by zellieh)
From: [personal profile] zellieh
Pretty young Professor Rodney would tempt anyone. *G*

Date: 2006-01-18 03:13 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney blue by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
He totally would! John never had a chance, and Rodney didn't either. Thanks.

Date: 2006-01-18 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miera-c.livejournal.com
now if all AU fic could be this fun... :)

Date: 2006-01-19 12:25 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john pretty in purple by chelle)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Hee! Thanks.

Date: 2006-01-18 04:43 am (UTC)
zoerayne: (sga)
From: [personal profile] zoerayne
Mmmm. I love pushy!John and nervous!Rodney. *g*

Date: 2006-01-19 01:50 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney look by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yes, they go well together, don't they. And John finally gets to top for once in one of my stories. *g*

Date: 2006-01-18 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com
John pushing himself on Rodney was very sweet in a hot sort of way! :)

Date: 2006-01-19 01:51 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney strip by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, I should do more with a slightly agressive John. It's so much fun to watch Rodney be stalked. *g* Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-18 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com
Oh oh oh Yay fun!

I LOVE the image of Rodney worrying and John just slumping at his feet in relief because they have *so* much money! Well, for college students/professor. And college!John hitting on intense-geeky-professor!Rodney hits all the right buttons for me. I just adore it;)

This is definitely going in my makes me ridiculously happy file.

Date: 2006-01-19 03:19 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (rodney woobiedreams by icon_ascension)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Oh, good. Yeah, 30K is a lot of money, but yet it's not going to last that long if it's all you lived on. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-18 10:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Aw, Rache - this is wonderful (as usual *g*.)
Vegas *and* McShep? The perfect combination. ;-)

Date: 2006-01-19 03:29 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (pegasus coffee by twisted_vergule)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Rodney and John are a great combo just by themself. But I would love to see them in vegas, or on a casino planet sometime. It would be a heck of a lot of fun. *g*

Thanks, hon.

Date: 2006-01-19 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pollitt.livejournal.com
That was too fun, and card shark John and Professor Rodney is just... yeah. So much fun in 1000 words :)

Date: 2006-01-20 05:31 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john bondage determined by icon_ascentio)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Gosh, hon, thanks! I don't know why I felt compelled to shove a whole AU into 1000 words, but I'm glad you liked how it turned out. Thanks!

Wow!

Date: 2006-01-22 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariniel.livejournal.com
I confess knowing nothing about cards and casinos, but this was brilliant!
John & Rodney are so cute, trying to make the big bucks... Love your writing style!

Re: Wow!

Date: 2006-01-22 11:02 pm (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney glasses by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
John and Rodney go together so well. I love the idea of them pulling off some caper together. Thanks!

Date: 2006-01-24 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mercuriosity.livejournal.com
Nng. And then they jack a sports a car and drive off into the sunset, right? Right?

I could so get behind this AU! *g*

Date: 2006-01-26 04:32 am (UTC)
ext_1637: (john rodney holding by newkidfan)
From: [identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com
Yes! They totally and completely ride off in the sunset together having won at life. *g* Thanks!
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