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At this point, I have three scenes to muck with and a new scene to write. Then I need a solid beta on it, a chance to correct those, and then I think I am done. Unfortunately, I am not focused today, so I will probably still have this much tomorrow to work on, but at least I feel like I see light at the end of the tunnel.

Oh wait.

That's not a light. It's a train, and it's coming straight at me. Arrrgh!

See y'all when I get this thing done.