Wow. The almost-a-summary style is brilliant, as are the VERY SPECIFIC descriptions of the characters' clothes. But I don't know what's more distressing: that you are obviously far too creative and clever for this ever to be mistaken for badfic, or the fact that badfic or not, I find the concept strangely alluring. MY INNER 14-YEAR-OLD SCARES ME.
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Date: 2006-01-06 10:31 am (UTC)